Thursday, April 30, 2015

angels writting letter about the war

Bethanys And Angels Letter.
hi mum I’m going to tell you about the trench and the war that was happening today but it’s pretty scary theres a lot of mud and blood and I see a lot of hats lighting up and it really dark everything is colored brown and a lot of people died because we fort for all of them and I really want to back but sorry I was forced to go to the war so sorry I think I hear something boom and a com  gun shooting outang ships that are going swish on the slow sea and cannons booming and rumbling and people screaming a lot and people talking outside I can see soldiers marching and shadows coming through my trench and I can see blood coming in our trench I’ll miss you and my friends that are having a dizez in the hospital is she ok so I've got to go yes she’s ok I've got to go now I’ll see you if I survive
angel quezon.

2 comments:

  1. GOOD JOB ME MATEY
    FROM ERIK CAMERON

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  2. where are the full stops? i don't get it when said i really want back.but the rest was very good

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